Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY


Hi friends, welcome back to my page.  This has been one long week!!!  32 hours of overtime and this weekend to recover.  I’m exhausted.

Anyhow, welcome back to my fabulous web page.  A place where writers come to converse with one another and I use as my magical doorway to step into my writing friends imaginary worlds for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS!  (Did you read that with a wrestling announcers voice?  That’s what I was going for.)

Wondering who we are?  I’m glad you asked.

~We are a fabulous group of individuals that posts 8-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we “hop” around and leave comments on each other’s snippets.  We welcome EVERYONE’s comments.~

Here’s my bit, let me know what you think.  😉   (This one’s not out yet, still plugging away at it.)

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“Really Esperanza.” Favian responded.  “I find it amusing that you feel that way, when I have pictures that prove otherwise.”

“Favian, those pictures may have been from our wedding, but that was nearly two years ago.”  I retorted.  “Those pictures are nothing but lost memories that you are holding onto of the family that you could have had but chose otherwise.”

“Esperanza go back to the house.”  Sebastian said quietly.

“Puta!”  Favian screamed.

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Neva Squires-Rodriguez was born and raised in a neighborhood located on the North Side of Chicago. Mother, Wife, Expert at Multitasking... and now, Author and Columnist for Reflejos Newspaper, Neva creates electrifying stories with a twist. Neva Squires-Rodriguez earned her Masters Degree from National University, a feat which she worked very hard to obtain and says she will work even harder to pay off. She claims to be a typical American, full of dreams that will hopefully get her to a more comfortable lifestyle one day. She says, “God has a plan and I will follow wherever it is that He takes me.”
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11 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY

  1. chellecordero says:

    Now that certainly was not a nice thing for Favian to call Esperanza. Very emotionally charged confrontation, well done.

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  2. I’m intrigued. Will Esperanza give him another chance, or is it really over??

    Make sure you get enough rest, Neva! That’s a lot of hours spent at work, and I think you have a high-stress job, no?

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  3. Wow, I’m amazed at how hard you worked this week and still showed up here. I’d probably be in a coma! Always glad to see you though.

    I’m beginning to see why the relationship with Favian was short-lived. He just doesn’t seem like the nicest guy and really needs to watch his language!

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  4. That’s it. I see an awful brawl coming. Excellent snippet, Neva.

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  5. I admire her efforts to stay calm and reason with him but he’s definitely not in a listening mood! Effective excerpt! (And be sure to get some rest, that’s quite a work schedule you have…)

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  6. Ed Hoornaert says:

    The high emotions in your characters reminds me of the Belgian side of family–very emotive and dramatic, even if they were from northern Europe. The French Canadian side of the family was always much more subdued.

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  7. Favian went from calm-ish to not calm at all pretty quickly. That’s not a good sign of his temper.

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