Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY @Goodreads. Read my fellow warriors pages on a link you’ll find here.


Hi friends!!!!  I’m having one of those very down days, where life just doesn’t make sense.  Don’t you hate it when that happens?  Anyhow I know I’ll get through it, going to do some major praying tonight.—On the plus side, the new job has been going well.  I’ve been working tons of hours and am really looking forward to my next check.

Enough of me, here’s the snippet.  Props to Teresa Cypher for figuring out who the characters were last week.  🙂  They are the children of Liliana-grown up.  Some of the children, you may not have met yet, because they’ll be introduced in the third book in the Liliana series.  That book will be coming out by the end of May.  🙂  I’m toying with the idea of continuing the story through the children.  Hmm, let me know what you think…  Now for the drama.

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My heart beat out of control as I rummaged through my mothers desk, glancing over my shoulder every few moments to make sure no one knew I was in her study.  Finally I found what I was looking for and sat completely still for at least five minutes as the piece of paper shook in my hand.

“What are you in here doing?”  My father said suddenly.

I slowly turned to stare at him, my bottom lip beginning to quiver.

“Daddy,”  I said slowly.  “You’re not my dad.”

My father let out a deep sigh, glancing back into the hallway before taking a step into the room to console me.

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Neva Squires-Rodriguez was born and raised in a neighborhood located on the North Side of Chicago. Mother, Wife, Expert at Multitasking... and now, Author and Columnist for Reflejos Newspaper, Neva creates electrifying stories with a twist. Neva Squires-Rodriguez earned her Masters Degree from National University, a feat which she worked very hard to obtain and says she will work even harder to pay off. She claims to be a typical American, full of dreams that will hopefully get her to a more comfortable lifestyle one day. She says, “God has a plan and I will follow wherever it is that He takes me.”
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19 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY @Goodreads. Read my fellow warriors pages on a link you’ll find here.

  1. chellecordero says:

    What a serious revelation for a daughter to have, I love the way her “daddy” handled it. Well done.

    Hope this week is a little better for you.

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  2. Chin up, GF and take a deep breath. One step at a time will get you through.
    As for the snippet, it’s a WOW, maybe a double wow. What a revelation.
    Happy work is good for you.

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  3. Oh wow, that makes so much sense! And I love it when a series continues with a second generation. I’m about to do that myself.

    Hope things look up for you this week.

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  4. ED Martin says:

    His response is going to be big if he’s looking around to make sure HE doesn’t get caught in there too!

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  5. naomi shaw says:

    So emotional. Heartbreaking. You captured the moment perfectly. Great snippet

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  6. caitlinstern says:

    All that effort, and then forgetting to be careful when she found what she wanted! But she needed to talk to him, anyway, right?

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  7. Write faster!! Wow… Liliana must have moved on!!! Or maybe she… Or… Yikes!

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  8. Wow, quite a lot packed into one short excerpt! What a ciffhanger too – great 8!

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  9. Great eight and I love how you handled the emotion, the fear and the uncertainty. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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  10. Ed Hoornaert says:

    Cool stuff–a scene fraught with emotion.

    I hope next week is better for you. For me, too, actually. I buried my brother-in-law, had three teeth extracted, had my car break down, and learned I need more physical therapy on my back. But this too shall pass.

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    • Hi Ed. Thank you so much. I’m so sorry to hear about your brother-in law. My prayers to you and your family in this difficult time. Looks like it’s been a rough week for everyone, hopefully next week goes better for us all.

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  11. hope the new week turns things around for you. stay the course.
    lovely snippet

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