Weekend Writing Warriors #8Sunday


My heat is running for the first time this year friends!  That’s right, it’s cold.  I’m not ready for fall, much less winter.   LOL  Just wanted to share that with you.  Anyhow, this is a little piece from book two, which will be released soon.  This is kind of an awkward moment.  I’m not going to tell you what’s going on here, but see if you can feel the tension in the room. (PS, notice my Amazon Like link on my menu?  Can you “like” me please?)

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Gilbert woke up and quickly jumped up to see what was going on. Antonio who was still zippering up his pants came out to help me and immediately started yelling at Gilbert.

“You were supposed to give me a warning, man!” Antonio shouted at him.

“Unbelievable! Do I pay you to sleep?” Antonio said as he looked from side to side, not knowing what to do or to say to me as I sat with my face covered in tears.

Gilbert didn’t say anything and I could hear Charles coming out of his room.

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Neva Squires-Rodriguez was born and raised in a neighborhood located on the North Side of Chicago. Mother, Wife, Expert at Multitasking... and now, Author and Columnist for Reflejos Newspaper, Neva creates electrifying stories with a twist. Neva Squires-Rodriguez earned her Masters Degree from National University, a feat which she worked very hard to obtain and says she will work even harder to pay off. She claims to be a typical American, full of dreams that will hopefully get her to a more comfortable lifestyle one day. She says, “God has a plan and I will follow wherever it is that He takes me.”
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17 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors #8Sunday

  1. chellecordero says:

    Very tense and completely piques my interest. Great snippet.

    I do have one suggestion, use ‘ zipping up his pants’ instead of zippering.

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  2. love it!! although Antonio is still on my shit list!! I definitely felt the tension. Liliana are you okay??

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  3. Eleri Stone says:

    That is an awkward moment. Curious to see how it plays out:)

    Like

  4. Chelle’s right about zipping but at this point I’m too freaked about Liliana from last week. Where did all these guys come from? More. We need more. Thanks, Neva.

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  5. Lauren Shiro says:

    Really good 8, Neva! Very intriguing, and you can absolutely feel the tension and awkward nature of the situation. You really have my attention. I am looking forward to reading more of the Liliana series! 🙂

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  6. elainecsc2013 says:

    Awkward, isn’t it? Nice 8.

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  7. Does seem very intense and a lot of people coming from all directions just ups the tension nicely. Excellent excerpt.

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  8. I can hardly wait to read this book, too, Neva. Glad to read that you are working on it. 🙂

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  9. Intense/awkward. Cant wait for next week to see all this play out.

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  10. Gem says:

    I definitely feel the “awkward” moment. My imagination is filling in a lot of possibilities. 😀

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  11. Daryl Devore says:

    Intense. Things don’t seem to be going well.
    Tweeted.

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  12. yhosby says:

    I could feel the tension; it gave me goosebumps. Something tells me this won’t end well for her…

    Keep smiling,
    Yawatta

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